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People fall in love.
Lovers remain,
people break up.
Lost it all, no gain.

Another person,
joining the scene.
You feel happy,
nothing in between.

Again distraction,
catches the eye.
Your lover says
Forever goodbye.

Conquering dark thoughts.
Crashing your goal.
A vicious burn,
ripping through your soul?
I tried making each block in a pattern:
5
4
4
5
for the syllables that is.
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This poem is about people breaking up, falling in love again and losing the love again. vicious circle in the game called love.
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"feelings" contest in :iconwallofdestiny:
journal: [link]
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This poem is all mine, MINE i tells ya!
i didn't use anything from others.
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Have fun!
take care
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:iconbooky-trueidentities:
nice, though why the "?" at the end, im curious
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:iconarcainwolf:
I don't know hehe, but it makes you think and gives that extra.. thingy to the poem :p
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:iconbooky-trueidentities:
yup it does
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:icon007balel:
007Balel Jan 20, 2011  Student Writer
It fits your desired pattern perfectly :)
I really like this, as well as the theme.
The flow is also good :)
Well done.
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:iconbehind-love456:
welcome~=D really like it!
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:iconwarriorfanatic99:
This is so amazingly awesome I love it! :heart: :iconiloveitplz:
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