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Born like most,
an average boy,
nothing to boast,
still alot of joy.

an age to play,
no one seems dull,
thoughts aren't grey
but very colorful.

You show me my place,
a threat with broken glass,
you'd cut my face
in front of this mass.

malfunctioning brain,
nerves shutting down,
starting to go insane.
Closing darkness, prepare to drown.

I close my mouth first,
then my eyes and ears.
You're definitely the worst
of all my fears.

On this theatre of life,
I'm playing mime,
closing myself from others.
Can't help myself this time.

Trusting people another day,
my heart bruised, left unspoken.
Am I afraid to say
It's already broken?

Keeping another secret,
locked in my mind.
Someone will regret
of not being kind.

These symbols I write,
can't pronounce or read.
Giving me strength to fight
and that's what I need.
Another poem,
a little kid has a lot of fun, joking around.
Then his dad tells him to SHUT THE FUCK UP or he'll break his glas and cut his face to pieces.

the boy ends up bein silent, still is.

tell me how it reads, is it easy to follow?

ty take care!
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Warriorfanatic99 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
This is so cool!

Poor boy near the end. :( I HUG!
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arcainwolf Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
hehe thanks :) you're awesome :)
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Warriorfanatic99 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Aww, thanks! :aww: You're awesome too!:)
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Behind-love456 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
aww so sad i really kinda feel like this like hiding my feelings but this poem tells alot =( its really sad but really good :hug:
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arcainwolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
thank you :D
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Behind-love456 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
welcome~:heart:
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Booky-TrueIdentities Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: what happened to you...?
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arcainwolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
mental breakdown at the age of 8, nothing much really :)
I'm glad I can express my feelings in these poems.
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Booky-TrueIdentities Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awe :tighthug: i is sorry.
yes poetry is such a lifesaver when it comes to that :)
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arcainwolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
hehe don't be sorry, it's ok :)
and yes it is
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